Okay, whew. Here goes. I am going to post some Slayers fan fiction. I am probably the second most horrible writer on the planet, after the idiots who wrote the Thong Song. Despite being a horrible writer, I am attempting to put my fantasies on paper (metaphorically) because I have spent the last year reading tons of awesome fan fiction and I kept thinking up different scenarios. So I am posting the first chapter of my Slayers: Second Generation (can't think of a clever title. bad omen) up here to be critiqued and commented. Please, nothing too nasty, but constructive criticism is welcome. Not that people really read this journal, I will post some of this to the beginning so everyone knows to treat me all gentle like.

ambie